He Said She Said
He wrote, she wrote
I wrote, they said:
I have been besieged for too long.
I said, she said
They wrote, he said:
Why am I no longer a victim?
They wrote, I said
She said, he wrote:
How is this not about me?
I said, I wrote,
I tried, I cried:
Why can't anyone see me?
I bleed my life
on paper with pen
to people with words.
It's only a certainty
my brand leaves me sober
knowing my story
is half of the battle.
I said, she said,
they said, he said:
I have taken my place
at the chair,
at the table.
I have to stop you
from taking me over.
He wrote, she wrote,
I wrote, they said,
They said, he said,
he wrote, she wrote:
My joy is a fable,
my friends are untruthful.
Can you please help me?
I need a moment.
He said, she said,
she wrote, he wrote,
they said, we said,
I wrote, I said:
Things might get crazy up ahead;
so I've taken my place at the chair,
at the table.
He said, she said,
He wrote, she wrote,
I tried, I cried:
I am a lie
and so are you.
by Owen Loscar
Nice drum beat rhythm, alternating with suggestive lines...
ReplyDeleteExtremely symbolic, nice use of repetition and apostrophe. Love this one Owen. Still like byzantium better though ;)
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